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Reply #135 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:40pm
 
Neens are not a race.

So you can say that, Gordon.

More a sub-species...
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Reply #136 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:43pm
 
Karnal wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:40pm:
Neens are not a race.

So you can say that, Gordon.

More a sub-species...


A false sign of hope
I prefer a milky bar
You, a golliwog
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Reply #137 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:48pm
 
Gordon wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:43pm:
Karnal wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:40pm:
Neens are not a race.

So you can say that, Gordon.

More a sub-species...


A false sign of hope
I prefer a milky bar
You, a golliwog


A milky-bar, eh?

At the Bondi Yeshiva?

Stick to the Neens, dear.
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Reply #138 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:54pm
 
Karnal wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:48pm:
Gordon wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:43pm:
Karnal wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:40pm:
Neens are not a race.

So you can say that, Gordon.

More a sub-species...


A false sign of hope
I prefer a milky bar
You, a golliwog


A milky-bar, eh?

At the Bondi Yeshiva?

Stick to the Neens, dear.


Milky bar for me
Top Deck racially diverse
I'll leave that to you
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Reply #139 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:55pm
 
We live in a street
peace of the suburbia
the birds love singing

(Late ninja edit.)
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Reply #140 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:59pm
 
trees are everywhere
where the birds pursue living
the birds love singing
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Reply #141 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:09pm
 
Karnal wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:25pm:
Setanta wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 5:55pm:
Notice how Haiku
Can bring us all together
In a civil way?  Grin


Aussies, Muslims, all.

Even the tinted races.

Setanta agrees.


We are all tinted
Some more than others, K.
No problem to me
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Reply #142 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:17pm
 
Setanta wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:09pm:
Karnal wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:25pm:
Setanta wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 5:55pm:
Notice how Haiku
Can bring us all together
In a civil way?  Grin


Aussies, Muslims, all.

Even the tinted races.

Setanta agrees.


We are all tinted
Some more than others, K.
No problem to me


Fail....on second line.
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Reply #143 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:25pm
 
Aussie wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:55pm:
We live in a street
peace of suburbia
the birds love singing


You need a tutor
Your Math really needs some work
How much would you pay?

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Reply #144 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:27pm
 
Aussie wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:17pm:
Setanta wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:09pm:
Karnal wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:25pm:
Setanta wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 5:55pm:
Notice how Haiku
Can bring us all together
In a civil way?  Grin


Aussies, Muslims, all.

Even the tinted races.

Setanta agrees.


We are all tinted
Some more than others, K.
No problem to me


Fail....on second line.


Damn! I shouldn't have shortened Karnal. Bad habit.

Sorry for the edit.
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Reply #145 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:34pm
 
Setanta wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:25pm:
Aussie wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:55pm:
We live in a street
peace of suburbia
the birds love singing


You need a tutor
Your Math really needs some work
How much would you pay?



Maybe translating
From Hindi then to English
Causes the errors

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Reply #146 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:49pm
 
Gordon wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:34pm:
Setanta wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:25pm:
Aussie wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 6:55pm:
We live in a street
peace of suburbia
the birds love singing


You need a tutor
Your Math really needs some work
How much would you pay?



Maybe translating
From Hindi then to English
Causes the errors



Suar ka bacha
Aussie's title in Hindi
It seems to suit him

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Reply #147 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:54pm
 
Have I bespoke worms
they make my lawns go browny
lawn grubs the birds fail
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Reply #148 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 8:58pm
 
Aussie wrote on Apr 28th, 2019 at 7:54pm:
Have I bespoke worms
they make my lawns go browny
lawn grubs the birds fail


You have had worms made
Tailored to your own front lawn
Why would you do that?
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Reply #149 - Apr 28th, 2019 at 9:48pm
 
Wait a minute - the essence of haiku is to make a clear statement and end it with a twist.. not just a simple statement....

Sun shining through cloud
Heaven's door is open
Storm is coming...
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