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Re: The Little Thread of Haiku
Reply #150 - Apr 28^th, 2019 at 10:00pm

Gordon wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 7:34pm:

Setanta wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 7:25pm:

Aussie wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 6:55pm:

We live in a street
peace of suburbia
the birds love singing

You need a tutor
Your Math really needs some work
How much would you pay?

Maybe translating
From Hindi then to English
Causes the errors

Too much curry farts.

The toilet's under repair.

Come to Harris Park.

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Re: The Little Thread of Haiku
Reply #151 - Apr 28^th, 2019 at 10:03pm

Gordon wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 7:34pm:

Setanta wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 7:25pm:

Aussie wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 6:55pm:

We live in a street
peace of suburbia
the birds love singing

You need a tutor
Your Math really needs some work
How much would you pay?

Maybe translating
From Hindi then to English
Causes the errors

Been to Delhi, dear?

Biriyani in Yangon?

You're almost tinted.

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Re: The Little Thread of Haiku
Reply #152 - Apr 28^th, 2019 at 10:20pm

Grappler Truth Teller Feller wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 9:48pm:

Wait a minute - the essence of haiku is to make a clear statement and end it with a twist.. not just a simple statement....

Sun shining through cloud
Heaven's door is open
Storm is coming...

No twist at the end Grap. May I edit?

Sun through wet forest
Heaven's door is opening
Oh, I am coming...

Edit: Damn me for accepting your counting! Adjusted.

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AiA Gold Member Offline Posts: 18405 Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #153 - Apr 28^th, 2019 at 11:08pm No time for haiku Hiking up the Sweetwater Thus my weekend ends
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AiA Gold Member Offline Posts: 18405 Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #154 - Apr 28^th, 2019 at 11:18pm Knees on Men's Room floor Jovial Monk and Aussie Ettamogah Pub
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Setanta Gold Member Offline \/ Peace man! Posts: 16432 Northern NSW Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #155 - Apr 28^th, 2019 at 11:27pm I must say adieu For my night is at an end Until tomorrow
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AiA Gold Member Offline Posts: 18405 Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #156 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 8:02am AiA wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 11:08pm: No time for haiku Hiking up the Sweetwater Thus my weekend ends Water; rocks; green; blue sky The trail suddenly narrows A female land whale
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Agnes Gold Member Offline fish dinner Posts: 6081 Bedford Park rnd	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #157 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 10:27am Grappler Truth Teller Feller wrote on Apr 28^th, 2019 at 9:48pm: Wait a minute - the essence of haiku is to make a clear statement and end it with a twist.. not just a simple statement.... Sun shining through cloud Heaven's door is open Storm is coming... Yes Grap, this thread is not haiku
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Karnal Gold Member Offline Australian Politics Posts: 95026 Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #158 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 1:30pm Curry farts are wet. Curry-shtters are tinted. Where does that leave us?
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aquascoot Gold Member Offline Australian Politics Posts: 34194 Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #159 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 3:09pm the default is failure the default is garbage you have to put the evolutionary blowtorch on yourself
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Aussie Gold Member Offline OzPolitic Posts: 38507 Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #160 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 4:23pm aquascoot wrote on Apr 29^th, 2019 at 3:09pm: the default is failure the default is garbage you have to put the evolutionary blowtorch on yourself F.
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Violet Crumble Gold Member Offline Posts: 576	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #161 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 6:10pm Be creative. https://www.poem-generator.org.uk/haiku/
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Aussie Gold Member Offline OzPolitic Posts: 38507 Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #162 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 6:13pm Violet Crumble wrote on Apr 29^th, 2019 at 6:10pm: Be creative. https://www.poem-generator.org.uk/haiku/ Can't be original ever, can you Neferti.
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John Smith Gold Member Offline Australian Politics Posts: 74151 Gender:	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #163 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 6:15pm Aussie wrote on Apr 29^th, 2019 at 6:13pm: Violet Crumble wrote on Apr 29^th, 2019 at 6:10pm: Be creative. https://www.poem-generator.org.uk/haiku/ Can't be original ever, can you Neferti. she gave away choo choo's secret
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Violet Crumble Gold Member Offline Posts: 576	Re: The Little Thread of Haiku Reply #164 - Apr 29^th, 2019 at 6:24pm Shivering autumn A mini, beady-eyed golfer sees poo at the old taxi
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